Twelve Revisions, One Voice Memo: How My AI Handled the Mechanical Work of Book Editing
192 em-dashes to convert. 13 chapters opening with “I was.” 400 words to trim from one chapter. Two characters who needed more texture. One scene that needed dialogue after the disaster.
Twelve revisions across 32 chapter files. Each one simple. Together, a week of keyboard work.
I’d gotten developmental notes on a manuscript. The kind every writer recognizes: clear, specific, and exhausting to execute.
So I recorded a voice memo. Twelve instructions, the way I’d describe them to an editor across a desk. Expand Catharine’s mother: coupons, hex codes, the receptionist job, the memory-care angle. Benjamin Lein should be a biker who sends emails about aliens. The balloon scene needs the post-disaster dialogue, not just the disaster.
My AI assistant transcribed the memo, broke it into 12 line items, and produced a new draft with every change implemented. Em-dashes converted. “I was” openings reworked. Characters expanded with the details I’d dictated. Word counts trimmed where I flagged them.
Then it ran an editorial evaluation. 8.5 out of 10, up from 8. Ninety-four to ninety-five percent publication-ready. The em-dash reduction alone moved the needle.
I made the creative calls. The AI handled the mechanical work. Twenty minutes of dictation replaced a week of tedium I would have hated every minute of.
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